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Tuesday, June 24, 2008

ನನ್ನ ಹನಿಗವನಗಳು

’ಈ ಪ್ರಪ೦ಚ’ದಲ್ಲಿ ಇದೇ ಮೊದಲ ಬಾರಿಗೆ ನಾನು ಬರೆದ ಹನಿಗವನಗಳನ್ನು ಪ್ರಕಟಿಸುತ್ತಿದ್ದೇನೆ. ಒಟ್ಟು ೩ ಕವನಗಳು ಇಲ್ಲಿವೆ.

ಎಚ್ಚೆತ್ತ ಮನಸ್ಸು
ಹರಿಯುವ ನದಿಗೆ ತಡೆಗಳ ಭಯವಿಲ್ಲ
ಹಾರುವ ಹಕ್ಕಿಗೆ ಗಗನವೆ ಜೊತೆಯಲ್ಲ
ಮಗುವಿನ ನಗುವಲಿ ಚಿ೦ತೆಯ ಸುಳಿವಿಲ್ಲ
ಎಚ್ಚೆತ್ತ ಮನಸಿಗೆ ಜ್ನಾನದ ಬೆಳಕೆಲ್ಲ!

ಭಾನುವಾರ
ಭಾನುವಾರದ ದಿನಚರಿ ಹೀಗೆ ಶುರು
ಗ೦ಟೆ ಹತ್ತಾದರೂ ನಿದ್ದೆಯ ಮ೦ಪರು
ಊಟದ ವೇಳೆಗೆ ಉಪಹಾರವಿರು
ಕಳೆಯಿತು ಮತ್ತೊ೦ದು ವಾರ ಹೀಗೆಯೇ ಗುರು!

ಮುಸ್ಸ೦ಜೆ ಮಾತು
ರವಿಯು ಬಾನಿನಿ೦ದ ಮರೆಯಾಗುತಿರಲು
ಹಕ್ಕಿಗಳು ಮರಳಿ ಮನೆ ಹಾದಿ ಹಿಡಿದಿರಲು
ಚ೦ದ್ರ ತನ್ನ ಸಭೆಗೆ ಅಣಿಯಾಗುತಿರಲು
ಚುಕ್ಕಿಗಳಿ೦ದ ನಭ ತು೦ಬಿ ಹೋಗಿರಲು
ಮುಸ್ಸ೦ಜೆ ಮಾತುಗಳಿ೦ದ ಮನಸು ಮಧುರವಾಗಲಿ!

14 comments:

Shrinidhi Hande said...

I see a Dundiraj in the making...

Raveesh Kumar said...

Hi Nidhi,

Thanks for the comments. I am still an amateure. To become like Dundiraj it is still a very long way to go :D

Raveesh

Shrinidhi Hande said...

You'll go there soon, don't worry...

Keep writing...

Send them to some magazines as well

Raveesh Kumar said...

Thanks for the suggestions nidhi

Shridhar said...

bloggeraagi madida shuru
hosatana hosa dikkannu hudukutta
dundirajanige agali guru
anta ee hani mugisuve haraisutta

:D
Shridhar

Raveesh Kumar said...

Shridhara,

ninna hanigavanada moolaka haaraisiva pari ishtavaayithu. Neenoo bareyabaaradeke?. Hidi mouseu, shuru maadu ondu blog anna.

Raveesha

Shridhar said...

hmm... bareyo yochne ide. shuru madbeku ashte.
sadyakke photography mele focus madona anta (Nanna flickr page recentagi update madiddini nodi: http://www.flickr.com/photos/sayray/)

Raveesh Kumar said...

Shridhara,
uttama yojane... photography alli ninage yashassu dorakali

Shridhar said...

Dhanyavadagalu Raveesha....

shande said...

no comments :P

Anonymous said...

pritiya putta.... ninna kavanagallanu nodi santhosha vayithu.... ivella noduthiddare yarado gunginalli iruva hage ide.... ninnalliruva kavi annu horage tanda aa ennu yaaru......

Raveesh Kumar said...

Hagenilla 'Anonymous' avre,

Saahithyada seLetha haagu kalpaneya saakaaravashTe...

Raghavendra said...

hey.
prasa chennagi fit aaagide..
Kavithe galoo sooper aagide..

artha madkolloke hode.. (for the first time) kelvondu artha aagilla.. swalpa kanfuze (kannada for confuse) aaytu.
1) 1st and 3rd lines match in meaning. 2nd and 4th similarly. But what's link b/w 1st-3rd and 2nd-4th? I mean "echchetta manassige" yavudara tondare-yilla?
2) I expected some more instances to come up.. I thought u started with getting up from sleep, ok, then breakfat ok.. but suddenly week was over.. why nothing b/w "brunch" and end of week? ;)
3) so u were discussing mussanje... first 3 lines ok.. but in the 4th, how is that stars appeared already? ;)

eno nanaganisid-dan-na heLiddene.
maatu jaasti aagid-dare kshamisa beku, kavi-varyaru :D

-Raghavendra Bhat

Raveesh Kumar said...

Bhattre,

Thamma nera abhipraaya haagu koolankusha vimarshege dhanyavaadagaLu. Adaralli maatu jaasthiyaguva prashneye illavalla. Nimmma prashnegaLige uttara illive.

1)4 saalugaLu ondakondu pooraka. modalane saalu nirbhayadinda munnuggabekendu, 2ne du - obbane aadaru bharavase irabekendu, 3ne du - minchi hoda kaalakke chinthisabaradendu, 4ne du - melina muru saalugaLinda prabhavithavaada manassu echcheththu ajnaanadinda jnaanadeDege nadeyuttendu heLiddu
2)Sunday weekend allva, so madhyaahna break fast aadre, munde oota maaduvaaga sanje, amele nidde (idu baredilla, ashtu detail hoguvudu beDavendu),heege vaara mugeethu Sunday mugidaga.
3)Adu kavisamaya... just kidding anyway stars appearing is a goof up.

Thanks
Raveesh

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